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pathetique.. wrocław, misiek and i on our way to nurnberg. i humbly ask for criticism on this one, especially the contrast and colours. ;)

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*sinecurea Sep 8, 2006, 3:59:09 AM
Now that's just cool :)
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~dissembled59 Sep 8, 2006, 4:21:25 AM
this would look so awesome w. a fisheye lens.
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~FrostyMonkee Sep 8, 2006, 4:31:48 AM
I love the 'crowding-in' feel and the framing you get from the papers, althought the subject being framed is slightly... vague, perhaps? For some reason my eys are drawn to the wrinkles on his shirt (which I like), all in all a very intersting composition.

Good contrast, good colours, although (and here I am NO specialist whatsoever, I suck at it) the conversion to B/W does appear a bit... digital. Maybe I'm overcritical, because this is truly an interesting shot and I really enjoy looking at it!

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~Narcotic-cat Sep 8, 2006, 7:22:11 AM
kontrast jest gites. a panu trochę się nogi zlewają dlatego wygląda jak lewitując duch;P
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~claytes Sep 8, 2006, 9:09:41 PM
i like the contrast.. i think it's close to being really good but the main problem is that it lacks a solid focal point.. there is no defined subject. i mean, the man with wrinkled shirt is cool but ... well, i dunno.. he is facing away. nothing to connect with here. there are my thoughts..

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~sheriktek Sep 9, 2006, 3:33:22 AM
don't have one though ;)
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~sheriktek Sep 9, 2006, 3:37:22 AM
thanks for commeting. the conversion is digital indeed, probably there's a bit too much processing, but i did the best i could. i'm happy you like the contrast :)
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~sheriktek Sep 9, 2006, 3:51:12 AM
yeah, i get what you mean.. it's not perfect, would have been better it the guy turned his head maybe. but i can't be sorry, i guess that's what street photography is, you rarely get a perfect shot. it's just the feeling that it could have been so much better that makes me feel a bit disappointed :) cheers for commenting.
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~sheriktek Sep 9, 2006, 5:06:40 AM
yeah, i get what you mean.. it's not perfect, would have been better it the guy turned his head maybe. but i can't be sorry, i guess that's what street photography is, you rarely get a perfect shot. it's just the feeling that it could have been so much better that makes me feel a bit disappointed :) cheers for commenting.
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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D70s
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Aug 7, 2006, 7:25:07 PM

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